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The true mistakes

by Bhavya
(Kochi,Kerala,India)




Mistakes are known to be one among,
But it extends as there are many along.
On the way, meets the sorrow, anger, fight…
And lasts till death.
Sorrow meets the scrupulous, inferiors
While happiness meets the pious and wise.
Leading us to different aims…
Without any truth behind…
Until the last worse moment,
The unique mistake awakes,
Defeating the scrupulous and inferiors.
While pious and wise win the battle…

Only the justice can reveal the truth
The truth…behind the dawn of every mistake.
This is the stage …
When you feel the heart weighing lighter than before…
Much free to carry along…
To wander the beauty of truth and justice around…



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Jan 18, 2013
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by: Bindhu

truly said :)
Jan 09, 2013
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by: nuggehallipankaja

How very true,Bhaya!
Jan 08, 2013
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by: bhavya

thank you for your valuable comment :)
Jan 06, 2013
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by: Pushpa Raghuram

Very interesting. We should learn to "Learn from our mistakes" and not repeat them. It is better to learn from other's mistakes. Have a wonderful year. Wishing you lot of satisfaction in your literary attempts.

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