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DEATHLESS DEATH

by Yoshita Misra
(Ajmer, Rajastan, India)


A man once offered deathless death,
Sadly, he turned into a corpse after his last breath.
He demanded a sacrifice,
And realized he was the one, who paid the price.
Humanity will finally cease one day,
Gradually the world is drifting away.
Raw spirits shall live forever,
Whosoever said it, must be clever.
Only death defines the concept of human life,
Deathless death is just a mythical knife.
Mortal corrupts themselves with power,
But absolute power will devour.
The false notion of immortality should end,
Humanity shall give up the errands and let death descend.

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Feb 05, 2022
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fantastic wriing
by: Gayathri Devi Duttur

Beautiful expression! I liked the first four lines and the mythical concept of immortality.A short poem sums up the whole life.

Jan 18, 2022
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Amazing writing by Yoshita Mishra
by: Reena jha

Deep thinking and amazing selection of words, seems you have pen down your soul,keep growing

Jan 17, 2022
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Your supremacy in writing
by: Nitya

Amazingly penned !

Jan 17, 2022
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A one
by: Manju pal

Wonderful writing... excellent

Jan 17, 2022
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Great poem
by: Niharika Sharma

Such a beautiful poem, I loved the essence of it! Looking forward to read more from you!

Jan 17, 2022
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You are superior in your thought process
by: Sarita

I really like your poem specially the lines
"Only death defines the concept of human life"
I like the way you express yourself. Continue writing ✍. Wishes

Jan 17, 2022
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Amazing work
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This is very good poem .you are the emerging poetess who express her ideas with reality . Very good poem and the title is also amazing which makes us ready to read the poem silently.Really your work is amazing And something difference which makes you different from other.

Jan 17, 2022
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Fabulous poem
by: HEMANT CHHIPA

Really appreciable👏👏👏 keep it up👍

Jan 17, 2022
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Amazing work
by: Your Name: saksham mishra

Amazing piece of literature Youshita Misra keep writing and growing.

Jan 17, 2022
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You're just amazing
by: Your Name: Meena Mishra

Really appreciate your poem. Keep it up. Keep growing

Jan 17, 2022
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by: Apoorv Sharma

You are a great storyteller with amazing conveying power and a person strong with pen with superior thought process literally...... Keep Going YOSHITA🔥❤

Jan 17, 2022
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The best poet
by: Urvi Maheshwari

Wow it's amazing.Loved the theme, delicacy of the poem. Thank you for providing us with such amazing poem. It's just worth reading it ❤️.

Jan 17, 2022
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The poem is just amazing!!
by: Simmi Sharma

The poem is just amazing!!

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