Thanx Iszy for your evergreen comments. You boost my morale. Thank you for visiting Radha! I'm happy I could forge a bond of humanism with you. Rains indeed numb me as they bring along a train of thoughts.
Aug 28, 2011 Rating
Lovely Raindrops by: Radha Bantwal
Lovely raindrops are falling from your poem into my consciousness...
Aug 19, 2011 Rating
it's you, it's you...I know it's you. by: isabel
The smell of rain upon the earth Stops me on these stairs Inviting me to stand and stare On the reflections I so care!
I sit down slowly, on these stairs To watch it fall down there It takes me home, On the wings of time To long lost days so fair!
As rain pound the pathway Memories pound my heart I can bear hunger and pain But the thoughts break my heart!
I love rain though I fear it?s rage It touches my soul?s melody It lends me hope tells me to strive I?m not a forgotten body!
It is just a drop, born for one moment That ceaselessly strives each breath So what if weak, so what if tiny Someday all walls will break!
I am a being of noble class How can I be meek? Again I rise, again I fall To see my deadlocks break! ~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~
It say it all..."So what if weak, so what if tiny Someday all walls will break!" one of my fav. phrases in this lovely and emotive poem of yours! I love poems that shows human triumphs and failures...so down to earth, no pretenses.
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