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Rains

by Safia.A.R.
(Doha,Qatar.)


Rains are dropping far and few,

making my heart look for the dew.

Beautiful is a small word to say,

This lovely rain takes my breath away.

Do you enjoy it as much as I do?

Do you feel inspired like I do?

Rains are dropping far and few,

making me long for my beloved,

which is nothing new!!

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Jun 26, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		a rebirth...
by: isabel

Raindrops are blessings from above
An instrument of purification and rebirth...
A loving caress from our God...
A panacea of our woes...
A gift of infinite hope!
May 06, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		Thanks
by: Safia A. R

Thanks Vimala and Tanuja for sharing your opinions.
May 05, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		longing
by: vimala ramu

The longing has been brought out well.
May 05, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		Thanks
by: Safia A.R.

Thanks Kami.It thrills me that u feel like that!
May 05, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		Rain makes my heart anew!
by: Tanuja Chatterjee

I love rain. I love to watch the drops falling like beads. The flip-flop sound, the smell of the soil, their eagerness to kiss the earth and perish makes me think. I feel rain touches my life with beauty to make my heart anew. With its spirits it recreates me-pure and strong and true!
May 05, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		Beautiful
by: kamini

A beautiful poem it is,makes one long for the rain..
May 05, 2011
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starstarstarstarstar 		Side notes
by: Safia A.R.

I wrote this poem during the monsoons,when my better half had left over seas for a long period of time.

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